Daily Lesson 1 Reflection
1. What did
students learn and which students struggled with the lesson?
In this lesson students learned how
to write introductions to persuasive letters. Students learned that the format
of an introduction in a persuasive letter begins by writing the issue of the
letter. Next the students wrote the three reasons that they are using to
support their issue. The students also learned to use transitional words and
phrases to introduce each of their reasons.
Some students forgot to use
transitional words and phrases. I had two students who not only listed their
reasons in the introduction paragraph but listed all of their supporting
detail. There were also a few students who signed their names at the bottom of
each paragraph which is an easy mistake to correct.
2. What are
alternate reads (interpretations) of your students’ performance or products?
The rigid structure of the introduction could be
seen as a downfall of the students’ products because it doesn’t allow for the
creativity free writing leads to. The introduction came right off of their graphic
organizers which we set up to be easy to use. This took away from the
creativity of free writing and left the content of the persuasive letter up to
planning ahead of time.
3. What did you learn about your students’
literacy practices that extend beyond your practices?
I learned that the students are
really reliant on examples that they are given. I wrote an introduction
paragraph, and explained to them what I was thinking as I was writing. I was
modeling choosing transition words from our transition word sheet and many of
them used the same transition words I did throughout their entire paragraph. I
see the importance of modeling for the students; it is something I am still
getting used to. It is challenging to understand what they can do on their own
and which things need a lot of support.
4. When and how
will you re-teach the material to students who need extra help?
I will talk to students in small
groups when the students are experiencing the same problems. I will use the
writing they have and ask them compare it to the writing I did and ask them
what they notice. I will talk about why what I have done is a strong way of
writing a persuasive letter. I will ask them to re-work what they have and show
it to me before they move on. I will talk to students individually when they
have issues no one else has.
5. If you were to
teach this same lesson again, what would you do differently and how do you
think the changes would improve students’ learning?
I actually think this lesson went really well. I am
happy with the results. I was explicit with my directions and that really
seemed to help the students. If I was to change one thing though, I would
require the students to use different transitional words and phrases then me.
Many of the students used the same transitional words and phrases I did in the
same exact order I did. I want to see
what they would be able to do picking out their own transitional words and
phrases. They were provided with a list of different transitional words and
phrases and as I was explaining I told them why I chose the transitional words
and phrases. I explained how sequential words need to be in the correct order
so I would like to see if they understood that mini-lesson. I would want to
know if they could use sequential words without an example from me in the
future.
6. What did you
learn so far about implementing your core practice and what do you need to do
to continue your professional learning.
My core practice is creating authentic meaningful
writing tasks. I asked students to make two plans for persuasive letters on
graphic organizers. I required them to plan one letter for their class student
council representatives. I was surprised that only two of them chose to continue
their letter to their student council representatives. I know we have read in
class how student get more excited when they have authentic tasks. I learned
that authentic to them might be writing a letter to my mentor teacher and me,
or to their parents asking for a phone, or more computer time. Just because the
task is not asking students to make a change in the world doesn’t mean it is
not real for them. So even topics that may seem silly as an adult are real and
motivating for students.
I need to practice my conferencing
skills. I am challenged by this because students are constantly asking me
questions and I find it challenging to conference and answer questions at the
same time. I also find it challenging to take notes during a conference; I have
realized that is something I need to do. I feel uncomfortable doing that
because I don’t want to make the kids feel uncomfortable but it is in the best
interest of the students. That way I can take the most authentic notes
possible, and best influence the students’ learning.
Daily Lesson 2 Reflection
1. What did
students learn and which students struggled with the lesson?
Today students learned how to write
the first body paragraph. Students used their persuasive letter organizers to
help them write the first paragraph. They learned to start off their paragraph
with their reason in the first sentence using a transitional word or phrase.
Then they wrote their three supporting details following the reason in three separate
sentences, or more. They also used a transitional word or phrase for each
supporting detail. Lastly they learned to restate their reason for the last
sentence of the paragraph.
There were two students who
struggled more than others with the lesson. One student wrote not only her
reasons in her introduction paragraph but her supporting details as well. So I
worked with her to try and break her introduction into three separate paragraphs.
After that we worked on inserting transitional words and phrases where they
were appropriate. Another student was really struggling with the structure of
the paragraph. So I decided to increase the scaffolding for him. In his graphic
organizers I number his phrases and told him to make them into complete
sentences in this order. I also told him to add transitional words and phrases
to his complete sentences. This seemed to help him complete the task more
easily.
2. What are
alternate reads (interpretations) of your students’ performance or products?
An alternate read on my students’
performance could be that they did not do well overall because while they had
the basic structure of a persuasive letter paragraph set up they are lacking
the basics of sentences and grammar. One of the shortcomings of the writing
unit was its lack of grammar. Many
students struggle with forming sentences. They either tend to be too short or
too long. They student’s also have a difficult time with capitalization. So if
a person values the punctuation of a sentence over the content of a paragraph
then the students could be seen as struggling.
3. What did you learn about your students’
literacy practices that extend beyond your practices?
I am finding out what does not seem like a lot of
material to me, is a lot of material for them. During my lesson today I did not
use a typed up list of exactly what I was going to say. This made me a little wordy
when I was covering all of the topics. That would be fine if I was with an older
group of students or adults but with fourth graders it leaves a look of
confusion on their faces. This makes me understand that the students are still
fine tuning their listening skills. I found this to be very informative because
it applies not only to language arts subjects but to any directions that I will
be giving to students this year. This is also helpful because I feel that I am
lacking in knowledge of the developments of fourth graders.
4. When and how
will you re-teach the material to students who need extra help?
I will talk to students in small
groups when the students are experiencing the same problems. I will use the
writing they have and ask them compare it to the writing I did and ask them
what they notice. I will talk about why what I have done is a strong way of
writing a persuasive letter. I will ask them to re-work what they have and show
it to me before they move on. I will talk to students individually when they
have issues no one else has.
5. If you were to
teach this same lesson again, what would you do differently and how do you
think the changes would improve students’ learning?
If I were to teach this lesson again
I would not only tell the students what I am writing as I am writing it but I
would talk about why I am putting the material in the order I am putting it. I
would tell them that I am putting my weakest reason in my first paragraph. I
would tell them this because I want to lead up to my strongest reason so it is
fresh in my readers mind when I make my plea in the conclusion. I would then
tell them that they want to do the same thing with their supporting details of
the reason.
If I tell the students the reasoning
behind what I am doing it will allow them to use that information in writings
to come. Often times when we are writing we are trying to persuade someone of
something. We are often using evidence to do so and if the students know the
best way to set up an argument or even a paper they will do better. It is
always easier to remember something you understand than it is to just memorize
a process. That I why I would want to explain to the students what I was
thinking and doing as I taught them the lesson.
6. What did you
learn so far about implementing your core practice and what do you need to do
to continue your professional learning?
My ideas about writing authentically
are not any different than they were yesterday. The students are enjoying
writing a letter where they came up with the subject.
To continue my professional learning
I need to speak carefully with each student I encounter. I need to see what
they wrote and ask them about the process behind the writing. This applies to
any subject. When I am trying to help a student the best way that I can do that
is to ask them what their thought process is. This is not the easiest thing to
do because I have found many times that students don’t know how to explain their
thought process. I need to work on different ways to question students to get
the most information out of their thinking. If I know their thinking then I am
going to be able to best assist the student and their individual needs.